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Thursday, June 14, 2018

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Image result for riceFamily Dinner
The smell throughout the house was tangy 
Boiling food made by Nanny
I sat at the table thinking twice
She knows I hate eating rice 
Another chaotic family dinner.

Image result for potatoes

Limerick

There was Potatoes all throughout the land 
Sometimes I wonder why they're so bland
Chop them up and put them on your plate 
Oh potatoes you really are great
Potatoes; a dinner never really planned.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2018 at 1:15 PM

    Hi Ruby Blu,
    My name is Charlotte and go to St Francis of Assisi school.
    I read your limerick and found that it was very funny because you talked about how the potato was great. You are a very thoughtful writer and I think that you will do very well with writing in the future. Have you ever thought of a question at the end of your blogs because that gives your readers a question to think about when they are writing.
    - Charlotte, you can find my blog by clicking on my name.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2018 at 2:11 PM

    Hi Ruby Blu,
    My name is Alani and I'm from Marshland School.
    I believe this is a very interesting limerick involving potatoes.
    Have you ever thought about making this into one big poem altogether? I think
    you have a really cool talent and you should make more.

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