My dopey Cat
Slowly strut up the hall
Here you come fluffiest of all
The purring motor begins to start
But then you ruin it with a fart
I look at your face I adore
and you jump from the couch to the floor.
But you don't put your landing gear down
and fall on your face you little clown.
Hi RubyBlu!
ReplyDeleteThis is Beccy here from St. Francis of Assisi School. I read your awesome poem about your dopey cat and I thought it was hilarious! This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. I especially like the starting part where it says:
Slowly strut up the hall
Here you come fluffiest of all
The purring motor begins to start
But then you ruin it with a fart, because it made me think of your cat as having two jobs or lives, firstly being a Queen or King, and then turning into a comedian or clown. You also taught me that cats don’t always land on their feet. Maybe next time you could say why you wrote the poem and maybe add a question at the end for everyone to answer in the comments. Nice Job!
From Beccy.
Hi Ruby it's Taylor from St. Francis of Assisi school, wow! I love this poem, it's so funny! The second paragraph made me laugh! I love cats! Next time maybe you could explain the poem a bit more...
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ReplyDeleteHi Rubyblu!
ReplyDeleteI am Micaela from St Francis of Assisi School!
I love your awesome poems and this one is my favorite!
I have a cat called hi-de-ho and this poem reminds me of her especially this part:Slowly strut up the hall
Here you come fluffiest of all
The purring motor begins to start
because my cat acts like she owns the place!
I do also think maybe you could include a question at the end though.
Whats your cats name?
-Micaela
Hi Micaela!
DeleteThank you for you comment, I will use your advice.
My cats name is Cinnamon. Hi-de-ho sounds adorable.
-Ruby Blu
I was dissolving in laughter after this rhyme,good job. I enjoyed the way you thought of the the rhyme and put it together. What made you choose your cat as a topic?
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ReplyDeleteluv ya poem.
Hello Ruby Blu!My name is Alani, I'm from Marshland School. I really love your poem about your cat, I think it's really awesome. She sounds really funny! What made you choose this topic?
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